Just when you thought you had won
Life has come and you are no longer sprung
Deep inside you know what to say
But you stay silent with the coming of another day
Darkness has taken over your mind
To everything your eyes are almost blind
These feeling your having aren鈥檛 that one of a kind
It鈥檚 like back in the day when souls were lost to the sands of time
Nothing you can do its like your hands are tied
Hopeless to control just like the first time you cried
When your eyes started to leak as if to become a waterfall
Raining upon anyone that might want to call
You鈥檙e fighting so hard to steal the pen from disteny's hand
Its like you鈥檙e refusing to understand
Life is all ready written your just living out a play
The soundtrack is the in making with the words you say
Yet you try to change your future into loneliness
Avoiding the adventure of life filling your heart with emptiness
Afraid that love might show her face and set your heart beats into a race
Then once again in the end your realize it wasn鈥檛 worth the chase
And your heart has shattered into the moons of outer space
Then back to the being of the entire play
When you forgot the words you were post to say
It鈥檚 was post to be another life has past with the coming of another day
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I was the one that promised not to leave your side
So tell me now why I'm the one who is left behind
I thought you said you loved me to
Was it all lies was not even a little bet true
You could have given just a little hint that you were going to leave
Then maybe it would have been easier to believe
Cause now I'm with a heart that鈥檚 in denial
And stock with eyes that are chasing your smile
Hoping on every train riding in every car
Going and going not knowing just how far
It would have to travel to get away from all this rain
That鈥檚 drowning the heart and causing the mind pain
Please come show me your beauty that lies in your eyes
If not that just give me the reason for your lies
Help me ease the thoughts of an abandoned heart
That鈥檚 slowly starting to fall apart
I don鈥檛 know what else to do
I thought you were coming back when you said you had to go
Everything happened so suddenly; I wasn鈥檛 expecting to be so lonely
Never thought I would be a companied by memories
Now I鈥檓 still in the same place as before
On my knees trying to get off the floor
Screaming at this heartless doorPoem from the heart what do you think?
i say its an 8. very good poem but it was a little unclear what was going on in the first half. i like how you separated it. and the rhyming with lies in the middle of the second stanza was a little awkward
could you read mine?
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