Wat do u think of this story?

ok so my friend wrote this awesome story and i want to know your opinion ok








You were working one day at this old run down cafe you were walking out because your shift was over you were walking to your car. As you were driving home your car sputtered to a halt you called your neighbor to come pick you up the tow truck arrives and out of one side a really preppy guy hops out you know him its....Jason the captain of the football team.


';GOD ____ CANT YOU TAKE CARE OF A CAR!!';





';not my fault my friend said he would help but he moved';





';I don't care just grab the chain';





As you grab the rusty chain it cuts your hand you run into the truck to the first-aid kit after you cleaned the cut Jason hopped in and told you he would take you home. You thought this was different he hated you but that mood came back when he really kicked you out of cab of the truck and drove off laughing you had fallen funny and you eared a crunch you were sure you had broken your wrist luckily your friend was there about to curse you out for calling and not showing up but when she saw you she helped you into her car and drove you to the ER. There you had to sit on one of their creepy hospital beds to wait for the X-Ray you put your head down when they sat somebody next to you. You looked over your shoulder it was a hot emo guy getting stitches on his arm and forehead you sat up and sat facing him, he blushed and sort of moved to angle himself towards you.





';So what happened to you?';





';I got pushed out of a car and broke my arm, you?';





';I was riding my board fell off the ramp and got my arm caught in the ramp and it.... well you can see.';





As you were just about to ask him what his name was they came back with your X-Ray, it was broken BAD they were going to get a type of splint under the cast but it was going to be PAINFUL to put on you wished your friend had stayed but she left you they took you into the back and put you in a creepy room you guessed sound proof. Right as they were prepping you he walked in and held your hand with his good arm.





';The names Sam';





';____';





';Pretty name but this is not going to be pretty squeeze if it get to be to much pain';





Right then they started putting it on instead of hurting you new friend Sam you screamed but he covered your mouth with his and squeezed your hand a little you squeezed his hand back until it was done you got a lime green cast they made James leave while they wrapped your wrist. You were sure he had left as you were walking out all you could think of was that kiss how wonderful it was. You were outside now when a Black Jeep was parked in front of you it was his he had the door opened and patted the seat for you to sit down.


';How did you know I was going to scream?





';I have had the same break before';





';Oh I am.....glad you were there';





';Well......nobody as pretty as you should ever be in pain so I thought I would dull the pain';





';Well it worked.';





You turned to kiss his cheek he turned to kiss your cheek your lips met with sparks, no not sparks FIREWORKS. He told you he would drive you home if you told him where to go, when he stopped in front of your house he reached in front of you and grabbed a sharpie and wrote his # on your cast. You kissed his cheek and grabbed the sharpie from him and wrote your # on his arm. He walked you to your doorstep and kissed you again you walked inside and looked back he was walking backwards to his car while blowing kisses at you you pretended to catch them. You knew it was cheesy but you was the keeper of your heart now, you did not care how silly he acted. He stopped and got into his car a pulled something out then you heard your phone go off you opened it he was calling you.


';I miss you, I love you';





';Sam we just met Love is a strong word';





';Oh yeah I forgot go and look at your second grade class picture.';


You looked.





';Okay now look next to you the little boy holding your hand.';


You dropped the picture it was...... your Sam from secong grade til 8th grade when he moved you cried for weeks because he was your first kiss, your first love. You ran outside and hugged him.





';Your back!';


';Forever honey and I am never leaving';





He pointed to the house two doors down that had been for sale that now was sold you kissed him for what seemed to be forever.


He was yours forever he grabbed your left and and put a ring on the ring finger it said ';be my forever';.





';Its not a wedding ring its a forever ring because I want you to be mine till the day the sun burns out';





';I would love that';





The rest of your life is up to you!Wat do u think of this story?
it's not very ';awesome';. there are many mistakes. MANY mistakes.





It's cheesy.





... and i just hate 2nd person in generalWat do u think of this story?
did u write that cos most people say it was there friends when it was them.





i didnt like it. it soundedlike one of those things which is followed by repost this message or youll never get kissed again lol





no offense
its very sweet.......
it was lovely:) and i dnt knw..i guess the best way to describe it is 'sweettttt' : ) : ) : ) It had been kinda weird wen Sam first kisses her..n they kip on kissing throughout lol...bt it all becomes really sweet n lovely wen we get to know that Sam is her childhood sweetheart :)