What do you think of these lyrics?

i wrote this song and im a little questionable about the lyrics. I'ts called Beautiful Epiphany and you can actually hear it if you want at www.myspace.com/foreshadowtheodds





';I have seen the light. I've seen it poke its head out through the clouds and the sun-ridden sky. Open up your eyes And you will see just how beautiful your hand looks in mine.





Write me your goodbyes, for this may very well be the last time you'll ever see me cry. In another life, I hope to see you standing next to me, right here by my side.





We will never let it die. We will forever be You and I. I hope, in time, you realize that this can reignite and take us to another world. Another place in time.





We have taken lives. We've taken those who spoke out against the Good with evil in their eyes. We have flown the skys. We've seen land that man has never walked on. That's never been seen by the human eye.





You took my disguise. You made me find out who I really am, way deep down inside. If I die tonight, I want you to know that I've got no regrets, nothing's left behind.';What do you think of these lyrics?
Great lyrics, make me want to write a short story based on them :p


However, there is no such word as ';sun-ridden';, it also seem to me that it means something along the lines of filled with sunlight, which I don't believe you are trying to say up there. I'm not the best songwriter out there so i can't help with coming up with a different word :pWhat do you think of these lyrics?
I think they're really good [=. Very meaningful. Totally adding your myspace haha.
I think they're beautiful. Touching.
wow...this lyrics are great...amazing...really touching but a bit sad as it also say about dying...buts all well said...i don't like it but I LOVE IT....