Should I continue to write songs or am I just too bad?

Okay... this is my first stab at happy lyrics. My three other songs I've posted on here have been sort of depressing. So.... yeah... I wanted to try something happy. Sorry if it's not very good, I've never felt anything like what my lyrics describe before. Also, they're a little spur of the moment and a tad rushed....





The feel of your hand


Holding fast to mine


The warmth of your breath


Against my lips


Everything about you


Makes me feel wanted


Makes me feel loved





The day we two met


I had this feeling


And then I knew


That you were the one


I wanted to be with


For the rest of my days





Just the sight of you


Sends my heart into a flutter


Everything else disappears


The lines of life blur


Nothing but me and you


Matters to me anymore





The feel of your hand


Holding fast to mine


The warmth of your breath


Against my lips


Everything about you


Makes me feel wanted


Makes me feel loved





It's in the simple things you do


That make me love you the way I do


How you always know


When I need you 'round


Or when I just


Wanna be left alone





Your voice saying my name


I watch the words fall


From your perfect lips


Completely surprised


That it was me you chose





The feel of your hand


Holding fast to mine


The warmth of your breath


Against my lips


Everything about you


Makes me feel wanted


Makes me feel loved





I never want this feeling to leave


I want you here always


By my side


Till the end of time





I always wanna feel


your hand holding fast to mine


Couldn't live without


The warmth of your breath


Against my lips


I need everything you do


It's like a drug


Because for the first time


Someone made me feel wanted


Made me feel loved


Oh, you make me feel loved





So...... was that okay? I thought it was so-so.... like it could have been better. But.... what do you think?Should I continue to write songs or am I just too bad?
i love it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchShould I continue to write songs or am I just too bad?
i think it is good...:] it would help to know what kind or tune it goes to...:] but i like it
';Do what you love and find someone to pay you for it';


(Unless you get tired of it!)
I LOVEit!!!
OMG I LOVE IT%26gt; make it a podcast on itunes and send me a mesage abou it cuz i friggin' luvvvvv it!!!!!!!!!!1 seriously, always write songs but keep ur life staright. like dont focus on being a song writer. have a wide variety. but that was probably better than the trash we heaar these days. make it a podcast and send me a messsage!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUUUVVV IT SO EFFIN'; MUUCCHHH!!!!
omg that sucked, stop they are just trying to see if you will make another bad poem so they can laugh at you.





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love the lyrics.....Keep doing these stuff,


I'm pretty sure sonner or later you will be famous :D


You are doing excellent..Don't give up..





cheers!
You honestly dont need to change anything about these lyrics,they're amazing!!!!